changed
became x 2
took
sued x 2
forked
was x 2
discovered
passed
had
concealed
overwhelmed
proved
stated
has x 5
made
found
grouped
pitted
compensated
has
taken x 4
conducted
hindered
have
brought
Present
is x 9
concealing
promises x 3
possess
evade
collapse x 2
employs x 2
wants
providing
standing
holds
attempting
evade
perceive
presides
hiring
preserve
operating
eliciting
entailing
playing x 2
hear
play
claims
are x 8
claims x 2
Future
can
will
ensure
evade x 2
perceive
cost
should
risk x 2
1. I don't think there is one singular tense that is prevalent in my draft, but rather a culmination of past and present.
2. The effect the current usage has that it makes the audience feels like this is a post-controversy mortem in that is a crisis of the past in terms of events but the issue is still prevalent today in that how the league, players, and society follows this controversy is a current event issue. That is what the mixture of past and present tenses does.
3. I believe the flow is good as it is and I do not plan to change it, but perhaps adjust to maybe enhance the fluidity of the transitions.
4. I have employed present tense verbs in my piece because I believes it adds to the power and flow of the piece.
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